Entry #3 - Mint

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    The foil wrapper crinkles as I peel it away from the packaging. Using my thumb, I push one of the small cylinders into my hand; then I pop it into directly into my gaping food receptacle. It clanks against my teeth before meeting its inevitable fate of being crushed by the same champers it just clanked against. Intense cooling overtakes my taste buds, almost to the point of pain, before my saliva gushes to the rescue, alleviating the burning sensation caused by the crushing of this cylinder. 

"Pheewwww" I exhale, then quickly inhale, noticing the overwhelming freshness released from my mouth. The coolness of my breath once again caused a slight pain; a slight, but enjoyable pain. The sweetness of the piece outweighs the discomfort of the coolness on my throat and tongue. Knowing I probably shouldn't, I again use my thumb to maneuver a piece into my hand. I repeat the process; although this time accompanied by a small amount of guilt. I sit back, close my eyes, and can't help but again yearn for another cylinder like I yearn for an ice-cold bottle of water on a scorching hot day.

So, what are these magical cylinders, you ask? Did I not mention such? Thanks for stopping by...


Comments

  1. CourtneyOctober 2, 2023 at 3:59 PM

    I've never seen someone describe mint in this sort of manner, but it is very relatable. Thank you for sharing.

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  2. Alyssa PalaciosOctober 11, 2023 at 1:32 AM

    I like the way you described this. Based off of your details I think id be able to guess what the objet is without knowing.

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  3. Mario MOctober 29, 2023 at 9:56 PM

    I've never thought of eating a mint to be so auditory before reading this. I like the imagery this post plays in my mind. I Imagine a cool breeze rushing within my mouth and the relatable pain I feel when drinking cold water afterwards. This was well made.

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